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diff --git a/chapter03/packages.xml b/chapter03/packages.xml
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+++ b/chapter03/packages.xml
@@ -15,14 +15,14 @@
before downloading packages to figure out if a newer version of any
package should be used to avoid security vulnerabilities.</para>
- <para>The upstreams may remove old releases, especially when these
+ <para>The upstream sources may remove old releases, especially when those
releases contain a security vulnerability. If one URL below is not
reachable, you should read the security advisories first to figure out
if a newer version (with the vulnerability fixed) should be used. If
not, try to download the removed package from a mirror. Although it's
possible to download an old release from a mirror even if this release
- has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not recommended to
- use a release known to be vulnerable for building your system.</para>
+ has been removed because of a vulnerability, it's not a good idea to
+ use a release known to be vulnerable when building your system.</para>
</note>
<para>Download or otherwise obtain the following packages:</para>
@@ -453,7 +453,7 @@
<para>MD5 sum: <literal>&linux-md5;</literal></para>
<note>
- <para>The Linux kernel is updated relatively often, many times due to
+ <para>The Linux kernel is updated quite frequently, many times due to
discoveries of security vulnerabilities. The latest available
<!--&linux-major-version;.&linux-minor-version;.x--> stable kernel
version <!--should--> may be