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-rw-r--r--chapter06/glibc-exp.xml6
-rw-r--r--chapter06/pwdgroup.xml18
2 files changed, 12 insertions, 12 deletions
diff --git a/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml b/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml
index 1acd57137..bd2bab1d2 100644
--- a/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml
+++ b/chapter06/glibc-exp.xml
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ it hasn't been installed yet.</para>
<para><userinput>sed 's/root/0' login/Makefile.backup &gt;
login/Makefile:</userinput> This sed command replaces all occurrences of
<filename>root</filename> in <filename>login/Makefile.backup</filename>
-with 0. This is because we don't have glibc on the LFS system yet, so
-usernames can't be resolved to their user id's. Therefore, we replace
-the username root with user id 0.</para>
+with 0. This is necessary because we don't have glibc on the LFS system yet, so
+user names can't be resolved to their user IDs. Therefore, we replace
+the user name "root" with user ID 0.</para>
<para><userinput>--enable-add-ons:</userinput> This enables the add-on that
we install with Glibc: linuxthreads</para>
diff --git a/chapter06/pwdgroup.xml b/chapter06/pwdgroup.xml
index 942281c2b..bf2f0315d 100644
--- a/chapter06/pwdgroup.xml
+++ b/chapter06/pwdgroup.xml
@@ -2,15 +2,15 @@
<title>Creating passwd and group files</title>
<?dbhtml filename="pwdgroup.html" dir="chapter06"?>
-<para>In order for the user and group root to be recognized and to be able to
-login, there needs to be an entry in the /etc/passwd and /etc/group file.
-Besides the group root, a couple of other groups are recommended and needed by
-packages. The groups created below aren't part of any standard.
-The LSB only recommends a group bin with GID 1 to be present besides
-group root. Other group names and GID's can be chosen by the user. Well
-written packages don't depend on GID numbers but just use the group
-name, so it doesn't matter which GID a group has. Since there
-aren't any standards for groups the groups created here are the groups the
+<para>In order for the user and the group "root" to be recognized and to be
+able to login, there need to be entries in the /etc/passwd and /etc/group file.
+Besides the group "root", a couple of other groups are recommended or needed
+by some packages. The groups created below aren't part of any standard.
+The LSB only recommends a group "bin" with GID 1 to be present besides
+"root". Other group names and GIDs can be chosen by the user.
+Well-written packages don't depend on GID numbers, but use the group's
+name; so it doesn't matter which GID a group has. Since there
+aren't any standards for groups, the groups created here are the groups the
MAKEDEV script (the script that creates the device files in the /dev
directory) mentions.</para>