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<sect2>
<title>Installation of Lilo</title>
-<para>We have chosen Lilo because we feel comfortable with it, but you
-may wish to take a look elsewhere. Someone has written a hint on
-GRUB at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>, an alternative
-boot loader.</para>
+<para>We have chosen Lilo as a boot loader because we feel comfortable with it, but you
+may wish to choose another. Someone has written a hint on
+GRUB at <ulink url="&hints-root;grub-howto.txt"/>.</para>
<para>Install Lilo by running the following commands:</para>
@@ -12,17 +11,17 @@ boot loader.</para>
make install</userinput></screen></para>
<para>It appears that compilation of this package fails on certain machines
-when the -g compiler flag is being used. If you can't compile Lilo at
+when the -g compiler flag is used. If you can't compile Lilo at
all, you should try to remove the -g value from the CFLAGS variable in the
<filename>Makefile</filename> file.</para>
<para>At the end of the installation the make install process will print a
message stating that /sbin/lilo has to be executed to complete the
-update. Don't do this as it has no use. The /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
+update. Don't do this, as it has no use: the /etc/lilo.conf isn't present
yet. We will complete the installation of lilo in chapter 8.</para>
<para>Maybe you'll be interested to know that someone wrote a hint on
-how to get a logo instead the the standard LILO prompt or menu. Take
+how to get a logo instead of the standard LILO prompt or menu. Take
a look at it at <ulink url="&hints-root;bootlogo.txt"/>.</para>
</sect2>