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diff --git a/chapter08/iproute2.xml b/chapter08/iproute2.xml
index 25e7e81be..d57e4725c 100644
--- a/chapter08/iproute2.xml
+++ b/chapter08/iproute2.xml
@@ -42,12 +42,12 @@
<title>Installation of IPRoute2</title>
<para>The <command>arpd</command> program included in this package will not
- be built since it is dependent on Berkeley DB, which is not installed in
- LFS. However, a directory for <command>arpd</command> and a man page will still
- be installed. Prevent this by running the commands below.
- If the <command>arpd</command> binary is needed,
- instructions for compiling Berkeley DB can be found in the BLFS Book at
- <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/db.html"/>.
+ be built since it depends on Berkeley DB, which is not installed in
+ LFS. However, a directory and a man page for <command>arpd</command> will still
+ be installed. Prevent this by running the commands shown below.
+ (If the <command>arpd</command> program is needed,
+ instructions for compiling Berkeley DB can be found in the BLFS book at
+ <ulink url="&blfs-book;server/db.html"/>.)
</para>
<screen><userinput remap="pre">sed -i /ARPD/d Makefile
@@ -129,7 +129,7 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="genl">
<term><command>genl</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Generic netlink utility frontend</para>
+ <para>Generic netlink utility front end</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 genl">
<primary sortas="b-genl">genl</primary>
</indexterm>
@@ -140,9 +140,9 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<term><command>ifcfg</command></term>
<listitem>
<para>A shell script wrapper for the <command>ip</command> command
- [Note that it requires the <command>arping</command> and
+ (Note that this script requires the <command>arping</command> and
<command>rdisk</command> programs from the
- iputils package found at <ulink url="http://www.skbuff.net/iputils/"/>.]</para>
+ iputils package found at <ulink url="http://www.skbuff.net/iputils/"/>.)</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ifcfg">
<primary sortas="b-ifcfg">ifcfg</primary>
</indexterm>
@@ -152,8 +152,8 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="ifstat">
<term><command>ifstat</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Shows the interface statistics, including the amount of
- transmitted and received packets by interface</para>
+ <para>Shows interface statistics, including the number of
+ packets transmitted and received, by interface</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ifstat">
<primary sortas="b-ifstat">ifstat</primary>
</indexterm>
@@ -163,7 +163,7 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="ip">
<term><command>ip</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>The main executable. It has several different functions:</para>
+ <para>The main executable. It has several different functions, including these:</para>
<para><command>ip link <replaceable>&lt;device&gt;</replaceable></command>
allows users to look at the state of devices and to make changes</para>
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="nstat">
<term><command>nstat</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Shows network statistics</para>
+ <para>Displays network statistics</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 nstat">
<primary sortas="b-nstat">nstat</primary>
</indexterm>
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="routef">
<term><command>routef</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>. This is for flushing
+ <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>, for flushing
the routing tables</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 routef">
<primary sortas="b-routef">routef</primary>
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="routel">
<term><command>routel</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>. This is for listing
+ <para>A component of <command>ip route</command>, for listing
the routing tables</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 routel">
<primary sortas="b-routel">routel</primary>
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
<varlistentry id="rtpr">
<term><command>rtpr</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Converts the output of <command>ip -o</command> back into a
+ <para>Converts the output of <command>ip -o</command> into a
readable form</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 rtpr">
<primary sortas="b-rtpr">rtpr</primary>
@@ -295,25 +295,26 @@ cp -v COPYING README* /usr/share/doc/iproute2-&iproute2-version;</userinput></sc
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
+ <!-- FixMe These options don't match tc -help screen -->
<varlistentry id="tc">
<term><command>tc</command></term>
<listitem>
- <para>Traffic Controlling Executable; this is for Quality Of Service
- (QOS) and Class Of Service (COS) implementations</para>
+ <para>Traffic control for Quality of Service
+ (QoS) and Class of Service (CoS) implementations</para>
- <para><command>tc qdisc</command> allows users to setup the queueing
+ <para><command>tc qdisc</command> allows users to set up the queueing
discipline</para>
- <para><command>tc class</command> allows users to setup classes based
+ <para><command>tc class</command> allows users to set up classes based
on the queuing discipline scheduling</para>
<para><command>tc estimator</command> allows users to estimate the
- network flow into a network</para>
+ data flow through a network</para>
- <para><command>tc filter</command> allows users to setup the QOS/COS
+ <para><command>tc filter</command> allows users to set up the QoS/CoS
packet filtering</para>
- <para><command>tc policy</command> allows users to setup the QOS/COS
+ <para><command>tc policy</command> allows users to set up the QoS/CoS
policies</para>
<indexterm zone="ch-system-iproute2 ss">
<primary sortas="b-tc">tc</primary>