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@@ -7,19 +7,18 @@ probably don't want to read this book. If you, however, do want to learn
more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens
between turning on your computer and seeing the command prompt, you want
to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO.
-This HOWTO builds a bare system, in a similar way as this book does, but it
-focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead of a complete
-system.
+This HOWTO builds a bare system, in way similar to the one this book
+uses, but it focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead
+of a complete system.
</para>
<para>
To decide whether you want to read this book or the P2B HOWTO, you could
-ask yourself this question: Is my main objective to get a working Linux
-system that I'm going to build myself and along the way learn and
-learn what every component of a system is for, or is just the learning
-part your main objective. If you want to build and learn, read this
-book. If you just want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better
-material to read.
+ask yourself this question: "Is my main objective to get a working Linux
+system that I'm going to build myself and, along the way, learn what
+every component of a system is for, or is just the learning part my main
+objective?" If you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just
+want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read.
</para>
<para>