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diff --git a/prologue/typography.xml b/prologue/typography.xml
index 909ff3032..84ff4ca16 100644
--- a/prologue/typography.xml
+++ b/prologue/typography.xml
@@ -28,13 +28,13 @@ to show filenames, such as
<para><emphasis>Emphasis</emphasis></para>
-<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book,
-mainly to emphasize important points or items.</para>
+<para>This form of text is used for several purposes in the book. Its main
+purpose is to emphasize important points or items.</para>
<para><ulink url="&lfs-root;"/></para>
-<para>This format is used for hyperlinks, both within the LFS
-community and to external pages, including HOWTOs, download locations,
+<para>This format is used for hyperlinks both within the LFS
+community and to external pages. It includes HOWTOs, download locations,
and websites.</para>
<screen><userinput>cat &gt; $LFS/etc/group &lt;&lt; "EOF"
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ Therefore, this entire section is generally typed as seen.</para>
<para><replaceable>[REPLACED TEXT]</replaceable></para>
<para>This format is used to encapsulate text that is not to be typed
-as seen or copy-and-pasted.</para>
+as seen or copied-and-pasted.</para>
<para><filename>passwd(5)</filename></para>