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| author | Simon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca> | 2001-03-15 16:05:36 +0000 |
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| committer | Simon Perreault <nomis80@videotron.ca> | 2001-03-15 16:05:36 +0000 |
| commit | 0c6dc0d843a61f6d6b04bef1836d8fdec8146478 (patch) | |
| tree | 0c6073a6194d4c7b4c9b6b35a58bdc1c4f5232fa | |
| parent | f311f27dbfda037df4f6bccbcd8f727bed8e5294 (diff) | |
Grammar fixes.
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@322 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
| -rw-r--r-- | preface/organization.xml | 2 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | preface/organpart1.xml | 5 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | preface/whonotread.xml | 17 |
3 files changed, 11 insertions, 13 deletions
diff --git a/preface/organization.xml b/preface/organization.xml index f04ac14fb..05f0cdbc2 100644 --- a/preface/organization.xml +++ b/preface/organization.xml @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ <para> This book is divided into the following parts. Although there is a lot of duplicate information in certain parts, it's the easiest way to read it -and not to mention the easiest way for me to maintain the book. +and, not to mention, the easiest way for me to maintain the book. </para> &pf-oz-organpart1; diff --git a/preface/organpart1.xml b/preface/organpart1.xml index a4a09921d..a5e1fac45 100644 --- a/preface/organpart1.xml +++ b/preface/organpart1.xml @@ -3,10 +3,9 @@ <para> Part One gives you general information about this book (versions, where -to get it, changelog, mailinglists and how to get in touch with me). +to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with me). It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to -read -before you start building an LFS system. +read before you start building an LFS system. </para> </sect2> diff --git a/preface/whonotread.xml b/preface/whonotread.xml index b54344783..f56e2d313 100644 --- a/preface/whonotread.xml +++ b/preface/whonotread.xml @@ -7,19 +7,18 @@ probably don't want to read this book. If you, however, do want to learn more about what happens behind the scenes, in particular what happens between turning on your computer and seeing the command prompt, you want to read the <quote>From Power Up To Bash Prompt</quote> (P2B) HOWTO. -This HOWTO builds a bare system, in a similar way as this book does, but it -focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead of a complete -system. +This HOWTO builds a bare system, in way similar to the one this book +uses, but it focusses more on just installing a bootable system instead +of a complete system. </para> <para> To decide whether you want to read this book or the P2B HOWTO, you could -ask yourself this question: Is my main objective to get a working Linux -system that I'm going to build myself and along the way learn and -learn what every component of a system is for, or is just the learning -part your main objective. If you want to build and learn, read this -book. If you just want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better -material to read. +ask yourself this question: "Is my main objective to get a working Linux +system that I'm going to build myself and, along the way, learn what +every component of a system is for, or is just the learning part my main +objective?" If you want to build and learn, read this book. If you just +want to learn, then the P2B HOWTO is probably better material to read. </para> <para> |