applied Alex's commas.patch

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1960 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/chapter02/install.xml b/chapter02/install.xml
index 4fbb404a0..b5330e91e 100644
--- a/chapter02/install.xml
+++ b/chapter02/install.xml
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 
 <para>Before you start using the LFS book, we should point out that all
 of the commands here assume that you are using the bash shell.  If you
-aren't, the commands may work but we can't guarantee it.  If you want a
+aren't, the commands may work, but we can't guarantee it.  If you want a
 simple life, use bash.</para>
 
 <para>Before you can actually start doing something with a package, you need
@@ -30,11 +30,11 @@ running:</para>
 
 <para><screen><userinput>bzcat filename.tar.bz2 | tar xv</userinput></screen></para>
 
-<para>Some tar programs (most of them nowadays but not all of them) are
-slightly modified to be able to use bzip2 files directly using either
-the I, the y or the j tar parameter, which works the same as the z tar 
-parameter to handle gzip archives. The above construction works no matter how
-your host system decided to patch bzip2.</para>
+<para>Nowadays most tar programs, but not all, are
+patched to be able to use bzip2 files directly.  They use either
+the -I, the -y, or the -j parameter, which work the same as the -z
+parameter for handling gzip files. The above construction, however,
+works no matter how your host system decided to patch tar.</para>
 
 <para>If a file is just tar'ed, it is unpacked by running:</para>