Grammar updates (mostly)

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diff --git a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
index 9715dfe77..dd267a7ec 100644
--- a/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
+++ b/chapter03/creatingpart.xml
@@ -13,13 +13,20 @@ Linux Native partition is already available, this subsection can be skipped.
 </para>
 
 <para>
-The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program the user prefers) is
+The cfdisk program (or another fdisk like program you prefer)) is
 started with the appropriate hard disk as the option (like /dev/hda if a
 new partition is to be created on the primary master IDE disk). It is used 
 to create a Linux Native partition, write the partition table and exit the 
-cfdisk program. The new partition's designation should be remembered. It 
-could be something like hda11 (as it is in my case). This newly created 
-partition will be referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
+cfdisk program. Please refer to the documentation that comes with your
+fdisk program of choice (the man pages are often a good place to start)
+and read the procedures about how to create a new Linux native
+partition and how to write the partition table.
+</para>
+
+<para>
+The new partition's designation should be remembered. It 
+could be something like hda11. This newly created partition will be 
+referred to as the LFS partition in this book.
 </para>
 
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