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authorGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-04-12 23:58:46 +0000
committerGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2001-04-12 23:58:46 +0000
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@@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
Below is a list of all the packages that are needed to download for building
the basic system. The version numbers printed correspond to versions of
the software that is known to work and which this book is based on.
-If the user
-experiences problems which he can't solve himself, he should download the
+If you
+experience problems which you can't solve yourself, then please download the
version that
-is assumed in this book (in case he downloaded a newer version).
+is assumed in this book (in case you downloaded a newer version).
</para>
<para>
@@ -22,21 +22,23 @@ Version</ulink>
We have provided a list of official download sites of the packages below
in <ulink url="appendixc.html">Appendix C - Official download locations
</ulink>. The LFS FTP archive only contains the versions of packages
-that are recommended for use in this book. Newer versions than the ones
-listed here might be found after having a look in Appendix C.
+that are recommended for use in this book. You can check the official
+sites in Appendix C to determin whether a newer package is available.
+If you do download a newer package, we would appreciate hearing
+whethere you were able to install the package using this book's
+instructions or not.
</para>
<para>
Please note that all files downloaded from the LFS FTP archive are files
-compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If the user does not know how to
-handle bz2
-files, he should read <ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install
-the software</ulink>.
+compressed with bzip2 instead of gz. If you don't know how to
+handle bz2 files, check out
+<ulink url="ch02-install.html">Chapter 2 - How to install the
+software</ulink>.
</para>
<para>
-The list below is current as of April 2nd, 2001 (give or take a few
-packages).
+The list below is current as of April 2nd, 2001
</para>
</sect1>