applied Alex's commas.patch

git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@1960 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/chapter05/whystatic.xml b/chapter05/whystatic.xml
index ace5bcbeb..e00b2f8d4 100644
--- a/chapter05/whystatic.xml
+++ b/chapter05/whystatic.xml
@@ -25,12 +25,13 @@ we call dynamically linked, as the library is loaded and unloaded dynamically,
 as the program needs it.</para>
 
 <para>So now we have a 1 KB file and a 2.5 MB file, but we still haven't saved any
-space (except maybe RAM until the library is needed). The REAL advantage to
+space (except maybe RAM until the library is needed). The
+<emphasis>real</emphasis> advantage of
 dynamically linked libraries is that we only need one copy of the library.
 If <filename>ls</filename> and <filename>rm</filename> both use the same 
 library, then we don't need two copies of the
 library, as they can both get the code from the same file.  
-Even when in memory, both programs share the same code, rather than loading
+Even when in memory, the two programs share the same code, rather than loading
 duplicates into memory. So not only are we saving hard disk space, but also
 precious RAM.</para>
 
@@ -46,9 +47,9 @@ need to make sure that the libraries are statically linked when you build
 them, hence the <userinput>--enable-static-link</userinput>, 
 <userinput>--disable-shared</userinput>, and
 <userinput>-static</userinput> flags used
-through Chapter 5. Once in Chapter 6, the first thing we do is build the
+through chapter 5. Once in chapter 6, the first thing we do is build the
 main set of system libraries, glibc. Once this is made we start rebuilding 
-all the programs we just did in Chapter 5, but this time dynamically linked, 
+all the programs we just did in chapter 5, but this time dynamically linked, 
 so that we can take advantage of the space saving opportunities.</para>
 
 <para>And there you have it, that's why you need to use those weird