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authorMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-06-16 20:09:36 +0000
committerMatthew Burgess <matthew@linuxfromscratch.org>2005-06-16 20:09:36 +0000
commiteb7bcc4791ff9983cc764cd5b82b354d9880a3fa (patch)
treee8b50a8cb26363e029ce7676663f7a0d7b8b2291 /chapter07
parentfe3130ace4e4d0798897eb1d7526a76b3372cee6 (diff)
More chapter 7 typo and markup fixes
git-svn-id: http://svn.linuxfromscratch.org/LFS/trunk/BOOK@6026 4aa44e1e-78dd-0310-a6d2-fbcd4c07a689
Diffstat (limited to 'chapter07')
-rw-r--r--chapter07/bootscripts.xml2
-rw-r--r--chapter07/hosts.xml8
-rw-r--r--chapter07/udev.xml2
3 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
index 995673409..186e29730 100644
--- a/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/bootscripts.xml
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ daemons</para>
<varlistentry id="udev-bootscripts">
<term><command>udev</command></term>
<listitem>
-<para>Sets up udev and create the devices nodes in <filename
+<para>Sets up udev and create the device nodes in <filename
class="directory">/dev</filename></para>
<indexterm zone="ch-scripts-bootscripts udev-bootscripts"><primary sortas="d-udev">udev</primary></indexterm>
</listitem>
diff --git a/chapter07/hosts.xml b/chapter07/hosts.xml
index b2a77c0c0..30644cd34 100644
--- a/chapter07/hosts.xml
+++ b/chapter07/hosts.xml
@@ -17,13 +17,13 @@
<primary sortas="d-network">network</primary>
<secondary>/etc/hosts</secondary></indexterm>
-<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP-address,
+<para>If a network card is to be configured, decide on the IP address,
FQDN, and possible aliases for use in the
<filename>/etc/hosts</filename> file. The syntax is:</para>
<screen>&lt;IP address&gt; myhost.example.org aliases</screen>
-<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (e.g.,
+<para>Unless the computer is to be visible to the Internet (i.e.,
there is a registered domain and a valid block of assigned IP
addresses&mdash;most users do not have this), make sure that the IP
address is in the private network IP address range. Valid ranges
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@ are:</para>
<screen> Class Networks
A 10.0.0.0
- B 172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.0
- C 192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.0</screen>
+ B 172.16.0.0 through 172.31.0.255
+ C 192.168.0.0 through 192.168.255.255</screen>
<para>A valid IP address could be 192.168.1.1. A valid FQDN for this
IP could be www.linuxfromscratch.org (not recommended because this is
diff --git a/chapter07/udev.xml b/chapter07/udev.xml
index ff50e7161..88e5a805b 100644
--- a/chapter07/udev.xml
+++ b/chapter07/udev.xml
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ and make this device available by creating the device node(s) for it.</para>
<title>Problems with Creating Devices</title>
<para>There are a few known problems when it comes to automatically creating
-devices nodes:</para>
+device nodes:</para>
<para>1) A kernel driver may not export its data to <systemitem
class="filesystem">sysfs</systemitem>.</para>