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diff --git a/chapter08/introduction.xml b/chapter08/introduction.xml
index e64986577..d1c95d498 100644
--- a/chapter08/introduction.xml
+++ b/chapter08/introduction.xml
@@ -3,8 +3,8 @@
 
 <para>
 This chapter will make LFS bootable. This chapter deals with building a
-new kernel for our new LFS system and adding the proper entries to LILO
-so that you can select to boot the LFS system at the LILO: prompt.
+new kernel for the new LFS system and adding the proper entries to LILO
+so that the LFS system can be selected for booting at the LILO: prompt.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>
diff --git a/chapter08/kernel.xml b/chapter08/kernel.xml
index 77db00cda..d60fe0767 100644
--- a/chapter08/kernel.xml
+++ b/chapter08/kernel.xml
@@ -9,9 +9,10 @@ the most recent kernel sources available.
 
 <para>
 Building the kernel involves a few steps: configuring it and compiling
-it. There are a few ways to configure the kernel. If you don't like the
-way this book does it, read the <filename>README</filename> file and find out
-what your other options are. Run the following commands to build the
+it. There are a few ways to configure the kernel. If a user doesn't like the
+way this book does it, he should read the <filename>README</filename>
+file and find out
+what the other options are. The following commands are run to build the
 kernel:
 </para>
 
diff --git a/chapter08/lilo.xml b/chapter08/lilo.xml
index 381f2dc56..c998387b2 100644
--- a/chapter08/lilo.xml
+++ b/chapter08/lilo.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 <para>
 In order to being able to boot from this partition, we need to update our
-/etc/lilo.conf file. Add the following lines to lilo.conf by running:
+/etc/lilo.conf file. The following lines get added to lilo.conf by running:
 </para>
 
 <literallayout>
@@ -18,12 +18,12 @@ image=/boot/lfskernel
 </literallayout>
 
 <para>
-&lt;partition&gt; must be replaced by your partition's designation (which
+&lt;partition&gt; must be replaced by the partition's designation (which
 would be /dev/hda5 in my case).
 </para>
 
 <para>
-Now update the boot loader by running:
+Now the boot loader gets updated by running:
 </para>
 
 <blockquote><literallayout>
diff --git a/chapter08/reboot.xml b/chapter08/reboot.xml
index 4ced41b8f..2a71dd631 100644
--- a/chapter08/reboot.xml
+++ b/chapter08/reboot.xml
@@ -3,16 +3,16 @@
 
 <para>
 Now that all software has been installed, bootscripts have been created, 
-it's time for you to reboot your computer. Shutdown your system with
-shutdown -r now and reboot into LFS. After the reboot you will have a normal
-login prompt like you have on your normal Linux system (unless you use XDM or
-some sort of other Display Manger (like KDM - KDE's version of XDM).
+it's time to reboot the computer. The system is shutdown with
+shutdown -r now and rebooted into LFS. After the reboot a normal
+login prompt like on the normal Linux system comes up (unless XDM or
+some sort of other Display Manger is used (like KDM - KDE's version of XDM)).
 </para>
 
 <para>
-One thing remains to be done and that's setting up networking. After you
-rebooted and finished the next chapter of this book your LFS system is
-ready for use and you can do with it whatever you want.
+One thing remains to be done and that's setting up networking. After having
+rebooted and finished the next chapter of this book the LFS system is
+ready for use and can be used to do with it whatever is wanted.
 </para>
 
 </sect1>