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authorGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2002-05-31 12:03:05 +0000
committerGerard Beekmans <gerard@linuxfromscratch.org>2002-05-31 12:03:05 +0000
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<sect2 id="pre-organ1">
<title>Part I - Introduction</title>
-<para>Part One gives general information about this book (versions, where
-to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and how to get in touch with us).
-It also explains a few important aspects you really want and need to
-read before starting to build an LFS system.</para>
+<para>Part I gives general information about the contents of book
+(revisions, where to get it, changelog, mailing lists, and other contact
+information). It also contains suggested reading that discusses a few
+important considerations to think about before beginning your LFS
+system.</para>
</sect2>