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@@ -6,18 +6,18 @@ LFS Commands is a tarball containing files which list the installation
commands for the packages installed in this book. These files can be
used to dump to a shell and install the packages, though some files
need to be modified (for example, when the kbd package is
-installed, it is needed to select the keyboard layout file, which can't be
-guessed).
+installed, you needed to select the keyboard layout file, becaue it can't
+reliably be guessed).
</para>
<para>
-These files can be used to quickly find out which commands have been
-changed between the different LFS versions as well. A user just downloads the
+These files can also be used to quickly find out which commands have been
+changed between the different LFS versions as well. Download the
lfs-commands tarball for this book version and the previous book version
-and runs a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
-have
-updated installation instructions, and he can modify his own scripts or
-reinstall a package if it seems necessary.
+and run a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
+have updated installation instructions, so any scripts you may have can
+be modified, or you can reinstall a package if you think that
+necessary.
</para>
<para>