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diff --git a/chapter02/commands.xml b/chapter02/commands.xml
index f862b5572..5b740893e 100644
--- a/chapter02/commands.xml
+++ b/chapter02/commands.xml
@@ -6,18 +6,18 @@ LFS Commands is a tarball containing files which list the installation
 commands for the packages installed in this book. These files can be
 used to dump to a shell and install the packages, though some files 
 need to be modified (for example, when the kbd package is 
-installed, it is needed to select the keyboard layout file, which can't be
-guessed).
+installed, you needed to select the keyboard layout file, becaue it can't 
+reliably be guessed).
 </para>
 
 <para>
-These files can be used to quickly find out which commands have been
-changed between the different LFS versions as well. A user just downloads the
+These files can also be used to quickly find out which commands have been
+changed between the different LFS versions as well. Download the
 lfs-commands tarball for this book version and the previous book version 
-and runs a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
-have 
-updated installation instructions, and he can modify his own scripts or 
-reinstall a package if it seems necessary.
+and run a diff on the files. That way it is possible to see which packages
+have updated installation instructions, so any scripts you may have can 
+be modified, or you can reinstall a package if you think that
+necessary.
 </para>
 
 <para>